Common Threads
First EditionEllen Kuhl Repetto; Jane E. Aaron
©2014Through brief high-interest readings, probing questions, extensive writing suggestions, and practical reading and writing instruction, Common Threads uses nonfiction selections to teach you to engage with complex texts.
Table of Contents
Preface
PART ONE. GUIDE TO READING AND WRITING
1 READING
Reading Attentively
Reading Critically
Preparing
Reading Actively
Using a Reading Checklist
CHECKLIST FOR CRITICAL READING
Analyzing a Sample Essay
BARBARA LAZEAR ASCHER, The Box Man
Seeing a homeless man arrange a living room of boxes in a city doorway, the author notes a difference between loneliness and solitude.
Vocabulary
Key Ideas and Details
Craft and Structure
Integration of Knowledge and Ideas
Reading Visuals
Photographs and Artwork
COLIN GREGORY PALMER, Homeless — American Flag (Photograph)
Infographics
US DEPARTMENT OF HOUSING AND URBAN DEVELOPMENT, Summary of Homeless Persons by Subpopulations Reported (Table)
NATIONAL ALLIANCE TO END HOMELESSNESS, Homeless Populations and Subpopulations, 2011 (Bar Graph)
2 DEVELOPING AN ESSAY
Getting Started
Considering Your Subject and Purpose
Considering Your Audience
Generating Ideas
Speaking and Listening
Journal Writing
Freewriting
Brainstorming
Using the Methods of Development
Forming a Thesis
Identifying Your Main Point
Drafting and Revising a Thesis Statement
Organizing
Creating a Plan
Thinking in Paragraphs
Considering the Introduction and Conclusion
Drafting
Writing, Not Revising
Grace Patterson’s First Draft
3 REVISING
Reading Your Own Work Critically
Looking at the Whole Draft
Purpose and Thesis
Unity
Unity in Paragraphs
Reading Your Own Work Critically
Looking at the Whole Draft
Purpose and Thesis
Unity
Unity in Paragraphs
Unity in Essays
Coherence
Coherence in Paragraphs
Coherence
Coherence in Paragraphs
Coherence in Essays
Development
Tone
Using a Revision Checklist
CHECKLIST FOR REVISION
Grace Patterson’s Revised Draft
Development
Tone
Using a Revision Checklist
CHECKLIST FOR REVISION
Grace Patterson’s Revised Draft
4 EDITING
Making Sentences Clear and Effective
Clarity
Conciseness
Emphasis
Parallelism
Variety
Choosing Clear and Effective Words
Denotations and Connotations
Concrete and Specific Words
Figures of Speech
Using an Editing Checklist
CHECKLIST FOR EDITING
Grace Patterson’s Editing and Final Draft
GRACE PATTERSON, A Rock and a Hard Place (Student Essay)
In response to Barbara Lazear Ascher’s essay (Chapter 1), the author questions the Box Man’s “choice” of homelessness.
Making Sentences Clear and Effective
Clarity
Conciseness
Emphasis
Parallelism
Variety
Choosing Clear and Effective Words
Denotations and Connotations
Concrete and Specific Words
Figures of Speech
Using an Editing Checklist
CHECKLIST FOR EDITING
Grace Patterson’s Editing and Final Draft
GRACE PATTERSON, A Rock and a Hard Place (Student Essay)
In response to Barbara Lazear Ascher’s essay (Chapter 1), the author questions the Box Man’s “choice” of homelessness.
5 WORKING WITH SOURCES
Writing about Readings
Researching a Topic
Asking Questions
Finding Sources
Evaluating Sources
Synthesizing Source Material
Summarizing
Paraphrasing
Quoting
Integrating
Avoiding Plagiarism
Documenting Sources in MLA Style
In-Text Citations
List of Works Cited
Writing about Readings
Researching a Topic
Asking Questions
Finding Sources
Evaluating Sources
Synthesizing Source Material
Summarizing
Paraphrasing
Quoting
Integrating
Avoiding Plagiarism
Documenting Sources in MLA Style
In-Text Citations
List of Works Cited
Sample Research Paper
JARROD BALLO, Women and Children First (Student Essay)
Looking into the options available to homeless people, a student discovers a shocking truth and argues for change.
JARROD BALLO, Women and Children First (Student Essay)
Looking into the options available to homeless people, a student discovers a shocking truth and argues for change.
PART TWO. SHORT ESSAYS BY METHOD AND THEME
6 NARRATION: Growing Up
Visual: Marjane Satrapi, from Persepolis (Graphic Memoir)
Seeing Narration
Reading Narration
Analyzing Narration in Paragraphs
Michael Ondaatje, from Running in the Family
Donald Hall, from Unpacking the Boxes
Developing a Narrative Essay
Reading Narration
Analyzing Narration in Paragraphs
Michael Ondaatje, from Running in the Family
Donald Hall, from Unpacking the Boxes
Developing a Narrative Essay
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON VERBS
A Note on Thematic Connections
FREDERICK DOUGLASS, Learning to Read and Write
MAYA ANGELOU, Champion of the World
AMY TAN, Pretty Beyond Belief
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON VERBS
A Note on Thematic Connections
FREDERICK DOUGLASS, Learning to Read and Write
MAYA ANGELOU, Champion of the World
AMY TAN, Pretty Beyond Belief
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
7 DESCRIPTION: Sensing Our Natural Surroundings
Visual: Ansel Adams, “Aspens, Northern New Mexico” (Photograph)
Seeing Description
Reading Description
Analyzing Description in Paragraphs
David Mura, from Turning Japanese
Diane Ackerman, from A Natural History of the Senses
Developing a Descriptive Essay
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONCRETE AND SPECIFIC LANGUAGE
A Note on Thematic Connections
JOAN DIDION, The Santa Ana
DAGOBERTO GILB, My Landlady’s Yard
ANNIE DILLARD, Living Like Weasels
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Reading Description
Analyzing Description in Paragraphs
David Mura, from Turning Japanese
Diane Ackerman, from A Natural History of the Senses
Developing a Descriptive Essay
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONCRETE AND SPECIFIC LANGUAGE
A Note on Thematic Connections
JOAN DIDION, The Santa Ana
DAGOBERTO GILB, My Landlady’s Yard
ANNIE DILLARD, Living Like Weasels
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
8 EXAMPLE: Using Language
Visual: Bethany Keeley, from The “Blog” of “Unnecessary” Quotation Marks (Signs)
Seeing Examples
Reading Examples
Analyzing Examples in Paragraphs
Richard Rodriguez, from “Aria: A Memoir of a Bilingual Childhood”
William Lutz, from Doublespeak
Developing an Essay by Example
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON SENTENCE VARIETY
A Note on Thematic Connections
DAVID SEDARIS, Me Talk Pretty One Day
KIRK JOHNSON, Today’s Kids Are, Like, Killing the English Language
ANITA JAIN, A Nameless Respect
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Reading Examples
Analyzing Examples in Paragraphs
Richard Rodriguez, from “Aria: A Memoir of a Bilingual Childhood”
William Lutz, from Doublespeak
Developing an Essay by Example
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON SENTENCE VARIETY
A Note on Thematic Connections
DAVID SEDARIS, Me Talk Pretty One Day
KIRK JOHNSON, Today’s Kids Are, Like, Killing the English Language
ANITA JAIN, A Nameless Respect
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
9 DIVISION OR ANALYSIS: Looking at Popular Culture
Visual: Wired Magazine, “Balance Your Media Diet” (Pyramid Chart)
Seeing Division or Analysis
Reading Division or Analysis
Analyzing Division or Analysis in Paragraphs
Jon Pareles, from “Gather No Moss, Take No Prisoners, but Be Cool”
Luci Tapahanso, from Sign Language
Developing an Essay by Division or Analysis
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON SOURCES
A Note on Thematic Connections
Reading Division or Analysis
Analyzing Division or Analysis in Paragraphs
Jon Pareles, from “Gather No Moss, Take No Prisoners, but Be Cool”
Luci Tapahanso, from Sign Language
Developing an Essay by Division or Analysis
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON SOURCES
A Note on Thematic Connections
MARGARET VISSER, The Ritual of Fast Food
THOMAS DE ZENGOTITA, American Idol Worship
PAT MORA, Great Expectations
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
THOMAS DE ZENGOTITA, American Idol Worship
PAT MORA, Great Expectations
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
10 CLASSIFICATION: Sorting Friends and Neighbors
Visual: US Census Bureau, “National Population by Race and by Hispanic or Latino Origin” (Bar Graph)
Seeing Classification
Reading Classification
Analyzing Classification in Paragraphs
Nelson George, from “Strangers on His Street”
Luis Alberto Urrea, from “Night Shift”
Seeing Classification
Reading Classification
Analyzing Classification in Paragraphs
Nelson George, from “Strangers on His Street”
Luis Alberto Urrea, from “Night Shift”
Developing an Essay by Classification
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON PUNCTUATION
A Note on Thematic Connections
BRANDON GRIGGS, The Most Annoying Facebookers
MARION WINIK, What Are Friends For?
DAVID BROOKS, People Like Us
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON PUNCTUATION
A Note on Thematic Connections
BRANDON GRIGGS, The Most Annoying Facebookers
MARION WINIK, What Are Friends For?
DAVID BROOKS, People Like Us
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
11 PROCESS ANALYSIS: Eating Well
Visual: Jearl Walker, “The Microwave Oven: How It Works” (Illustration)
Seeing Process Analysis
Reading Process Analysis
Analyzing Processes in Paragraphs
L. Rust Hills, from “How to Eat an Ice Cream Cone”
Jane E. Brody, from Jane Brody’s Nutrition Book
Seeing Process Analysis
Reading Process Analysis
Analyzing Processes in Paragraphs
L. Rust Hills, from “How to Eat an Ice Cream Cone”
Jane E. Brody, from Jane Brody’s Nutrition Book
Developing an Essay by Process Analysis
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONSISTENCY
A Note on Thematic Connections
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONSISTENCY
A Note on Thematic Connections
FIROOZEH DUMAS, Sweet, Sour, and Resentful
LARS EIGHNER, Dumpster Diving
BARBARA KINGSOLVER, Stalking the Vegetannual
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
LARS EIGHNER, Dumpster Diving
BARBARA KINGSOLVER, Stalking the Vegetannual
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
12 COMPARISON AND CONTRAST: Examining Stereotypes
Visual: Norman Rockwell, Freedom from Want (Painting)
Visual: Art Spiegelman, Freedom from Want (Drawing)
Visual: Art Spiegelman, Freedom from Want (Drawing)
Seeing Comparison and Contrast
Reading Comparison and Contrast
Analyzing Comparison and Contrast in Paragraphs
Michael Dorris, from “Noble Savages? We’ll Drink to That”
Julia Álvarez, from “A White Woman of Color”
Developing an Essay by Comparison and Contrast
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON PARALLELISM
A Note on Thematic Connections
SUZANNE BRITT, Neat People vs. Sloppy People
LEANITA McCLAIN, The Middle-Class Black’s Burden
CHERYL PECK, Fatso
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Reading Comparison and Contrast
Analyzing Comparison and Contrast in Paragraphs
Michael Dorris, from “Noble Savages? We’ll Drink to That”
Julia Álvarez, from “A White Woman of Color”
Developing an Essay by Comparison and Contrast
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON PARALLELISM
A Note on Thematic Connections
SUZANNE BRITT, Neat People vs. Sloppy People
LEANITA McCLAIN, The Middle-Class Black’s Burden
CHERYL PECK, Fatso
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
13 DEFINITION: Pursuing Happiness
Visual: Peter Steiner, “I Hope You Realize…” (Cartoon)
Seeing Definition
Reading Definition
Analyzing Definition in Paragraphs
Carlin Flora, from “The Pursuit of Happiness”
Sarah Vowell, from “Pop-A-Shot”
Developing an Essay by Definition
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON RESTRICTIVE AND NONRESTRICTIVE ELEMENTS
A Note on Thematic Connections
JUDY BRADY, I Want a Wife
PICO IYER, The Joy of Less
WALTER MOSLEY, Get Happy
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Seeing Definition
Reading Definition
Analyzing Definition in Paragraphs
Carlin Flora, from “The Pursuit of Happiness”
Sarah Vowell, from “Pop-A-Shot”
Developing an Essay by Definition
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON RESTRICTIVE AND NONRESTRICTIVE ELEMENTS
A Note on Thematic Connections
JUDY BRADY, I Want a Wife
PICO IYER, The Joy of Less
WALTER MOSLEY, Get Happy
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
14 CAUSE-AND-EFFECT ANALYSIS: Investigating the Working World
Visual: J. Howard Miller, We Can Do It! (Poster)
Seeing Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Reading Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Analyzing Causes and Effects in Paragraphs
Barbara Ehrenreich, from Nickel and Dimed
Malcolm Gladwell, from Outliers
Developing an Essay by Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONCISENESS
A Note on Thematic Connections
DANA THOMAS, The Fake Trade
ELLEN GOODMAN, The Company Man
CHARLIE LE DUFF, End of the Line
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
Seeing Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Reading Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Analyzing Causes and Effects in Paragraphs
Barbara Ehrenreich, from Nickel and Dimed
Malcolm Gladwell, from Outliers
Developing an Essay by Cause-and-Effect Analysis
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON CONCISENESS
A Note on Thematic Connections
DANA THOMAS, The Fake Trade
ELLEN GOODMAN, The Company Man
CHARLIE LE DUFF, End of the Line
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
15 ARGUMENT AND PERSUASION: Debating Law and Order
Visual: American Civil Liberties Union, “The Man on the Left” (Advertisement)
Seeing Argument and Persuasion
Seeing Argument and Persuasion
Reading Argument and Persuasion
The Elements of Argument
Appeals to Readers
Ethical Appeal
The Elements of Argument
Appeals to Readers
Ethical Appeal
Emotional Appeal
Rational Appeal
Fallacies
Analyzing Argument and Persuasion in Paragraphs
Jenny Price, from “Gun Violence at UC Irvine”
John Stossel, from “Guns Save Lives”
Developing an Argumentative and Persuasive Essay
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON TONE
A Note on Thematic Connections
ANNA QUINDLEN, The C Word In the Hallways
WILBERT RIDEAU, Why Prisons Don’t Work
MARIE MYUNG-OK LEE, I Was an Anchor Baby
Fallacies
Analyzing Argument and Persuasion in Paragraphs
Jenny Price, from “Gun Violence at UC Irvine”
John Stossel, from “Guns Save Lives”
Developing an Argumentative and Persuasive Essay
Getting Started
Forming a Thesis
Organizing
Drafting
Revising and Editing
FOCUS ON TONE
A Note on Thematic Connections
ANNA QUINDLEN, The C Word In the Hallways
WILBERT RIDEAU, Why Prisons Don’t Work
MARIE MYUNG-OK LEE, I Was an Anchor Baby
CASEBOOK: REGULATING TECHNOLOGY
DISTRACTED DRIVING
CAROLYN McCARTHY, Should Text Messaging While Driving Be Banned? Yes.
RADLEY BALKO, Should Text Messaging While Driving Be Banned? No.
INTERNET PRIVACY
NICHOLAS CARR, Tracking Is an Assault on Liberty
JIM HARPER, Web Users Get as Much as They Give
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
DISTRACTED DRIVING
CAROLYN McCARTHY, Should Text Messaging While Driving Be Banned? Yes.
RADLEY BALKO, Should Text Messaging While Driving Be Banned? No.
INTERNET PRIVACY
NICHOLAS CARR, Tracking Is an Assault on Liberty
JIM HARPER, Web Users Get as Much as They Give
Writing with the Method
Writing about the Theme
APPENDIX HISTORIC SPEECHES
Reading and Listening to Speeches
Keys to Effective Speaking
Planning
Structuring
Introduction
Keys to Effective Speaking
Planning
Structuring
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Integrating Multimedia
Rehearsing
A Note on Thematic Connections
Integrating Multimedia
Rehearsing
A Note on Thematic Connections
PATRICK HENRY, Speech to the Second Virginia Convention
ELIZABETH CADY STANTON, Seneca Falls Keynote Address
SOJOURNER TRUTH, Ain’t I a Woman?
ELIZABETH CADY STANTON, Seneca Falls Keynote Address
SOJOURNER TRUTH, Ain’t I a Woman?
ABRAHAM LINCOLN, The Gettysburg Address
MARTIN LUTHER KING JR., I Have a Dream